Comments on: #Fact: Proposal Readers Don’t Want Suspense

By: Tom Conroy

Tom Conroy — Thu, 04 Jan 2018 01:33:09 +0000

Hi, Paul,

I agree that grade school English class might not prepare students for persuasive writing as well as it could. When writing proposals, the writer is, for all intents and purposes, selling the reader business. The reader is the customer, and the customer’s needs are a foremost consideration when selling to them. I would argue the adage, “the customer is always right” also applies in this case. Knowing the reader and what they expect is the best way to creating a successful proposal.

By: KC Cowan

KC Cowan — Wed, 03 Jan 2018 23:44:18 +0000

I think people can sometimes get wrapped up in their excitement over their proposal and their hope for approval that they forget the entire purpose of the proposal in the first place. Persuasion is a hard skill to master sometimes. At some points, people lean towards vague explanations in the beginning in order to keep the audience interested and make sure that they listen attentively for the punchline. However, with proposals, the whole point is to make your audience realize from the beginning that you are the best person to get the job done. If anything, the proposal is meant to help the writer get a customer while influencing the customer into seeing why the writer is the best option. If one creates a proposal and visualizes his or herself in the audience’s seat, it may make it easier to remember that project transparency is the best course of action.

By: Paul Stiles

Paul Stiles — Wed, 03 Jan 2018 15:44:33 +0000

What I think is the most important piece of information is Tucker Max stating the document is “to be about the reader not you”. That kind of writing is so difficult to do because it goes against what we have been taught about English since grade school.When writing a proposal, you must use your empathy to guide you. If you were in the perspective of the investor what underlying facts would you need to hear?